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> Read up on inclusive language and make sure you aren't including outdated terms.

I suppose, sure. But as the document ages the definition of “inclusive” will change, and some of the adaptations such as singular “they” can make writing less clear.



If clarity is the problem then one should use an actual name instead of a pronoun anyway.


Can you give an example where it would be confusing? I know it is controversial, but to me it seems very convenient when referring to an unspecific person.


Over the years I've done a fair amount of reworking documents from "he or she" style to "they" style.

I've found that using "they" style does quite often make it harder to be clear, when you've got a sentence that's talking about both a person and some things.

Something like

"Then the operator must update all the rules. They must ensure that no bad things happen."

Does the "they" refer to the operator or the rules?

Of course you can always rephrase to make it clear again, but you're losing a certain amount of freedom of arrangement that you might have wanted to use for other purposes.


I like the shorthand "s/he", but people look at it funny.


Yeah, I can see how this can be confusing.


As a matter of language use only, the phrase "They are coming over to my house later". Should I expect one person, or multiple people? Should I go out and grab a 6-pack of beer for my visitor(s) or a case? Easily clarified, and I'm happy to use people's preferred pronouns, but let's not pretend there isn't the loss of precision there.


A piece of text does not use they/he/she without first establishing the noun that these will reference. The problem you are referring to does not happen if you write correctly.


You are quite right. Unfortunately, my life puts me in the position of interacting with people who's writing, especially via SMS, is often incorrect.


Pronouns refer back to some previous noun phrase. Saying “she is coming over to my house later” would also be a weird and confusing thing to say without first establishing who you are talking about.

In technical writing you might say something like “The user will enter their password…”, where the pronoun “their” of course refers back to “the user”.


It is very convienent. It gets unclear when people try to substitute it 1-1 for he or she in situations when the number of people is unknown.

I use they as often as possible, but the writer needs to build their sentences with it in mind.


This confusion (or uncertainty or boredom with details) leads to sentences written in the passive voice, which is not progress.




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